the big bug
Once upona time there was a bug named Lola. She was a very small butterfly. She sall (i.e. saw) a very big bug. When she sall the big bug she flyd (i.e. flied) away. When she was back home she wishd to be big too. When she went to sleep her wish came troo and she was Lola the big bug just like the big bug.
the end
Ah, if only it were trooly that simple. :) Good stuff, huh?
7 comments:
I love it!! Please let Gracie read this note to her:
I loved your story about the Big Bug, it was very good! I hope you will keep writing stories because I loved to write stories when I was a little girl and so did your Mom... I love you!
Love, Baba
Bria, hope you got your chair with no trouble!! send a picture, lunch was fun will have to do it again when we can visit longer and shop!! love, me
Dear Grace,
It was such a lovely story you wrote about the bug named Lola. Did you draw a picture of the butterfly? Keep on writting stories and reading them also.
Love Mrs.Rader
Grace
I loved your story; keep writing and keep your stories in a book. you never know where it will lead.have a fun day at school tomorrow.
hugs,
karen, baba's friend
Dear Grace,
This may show up twice as I am not exactly sure how to leave messages on your mom's blog.
I loved your story; I loved learning about Lola and maybe there will be more stories about her. Keep on writing stories; I love to read them.
hugs,
Karen, Baba's friend
Dear Grace,
What a happy, happy story. I'm glad you wrote it. Lola's wishes came true. I hope yours do too. Keep wishing for "big" things. Love, Grandma
PS Hi Hanna. Have a great day! Love, Grandma
Dear Grace,
What a happy, happy story. I'm glad you wrote it. Lola's wishes came true. I hope yours do too. Keep wishing for "big" things. Love, Grandma
PS Hi Hanna. Have a great day! Love, Grandma
grace,
i love your story!
lindsay
(typed by Lindsay herself- so proud of you Grace!)
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